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clarified, "potential Wildland Urban Interface"
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SiteAdmin Aug 19 2025 at 10:09AM on page 73
Still waiting on this data. Can someone provide? If not, we can delete the row.
SiteAdmin Aug 19 2025 at 10:04AM on page 71
Add caption or title to each of these street sections.
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SiteAdmin Aug 19 2025 at 9:54AM on page 51
Still need to double check, but I've changed to just "historic structures" in the meantime.
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SiteAdmin Aug 19 2025 at 9:43AM on page 28
Yes, they are intended to show land use colors.
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SiteAdmin Aug 19 2025 at 9:39AM on page 17
Changed to "daily necessities"
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SiteAdmin Aug 19 2025 at 9:35AM on page 11
what needs to be reworked? Need more direction.
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SiteAdmin Aug 19 2025 at 9:34AM on page 9
Changed to "historic conservation"
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:51PM on page 102
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Holladay contracts for fire, police and public works.
Water, sewer, and sanitation are not contracted services - they are run by separate entities.
Water, sewer, and sanitation are not contracted services - they are run by separate entities.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:43PM on page 96
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Start words with lowercase letters.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:40PM on page 94
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WUI area has not been officially determined
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:36PM on page 89
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Delete the
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:36PM on page 89
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Delete the
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:33PM on page 88
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Lower-case b
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:31PM on page 87
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Should we change "Costco" to big box retail.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:29PM on page 86
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Delete "Small Area"
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:26PM on page 85
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Delete "Small Area"
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:24PM on page 85
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Naming of nodes is inconsistent.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:24PM on page 85
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Break into at least two sentences.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:23PM on page 85
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Delete "including improvements to Holladay Boulevard."
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:20PM on page 84
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Extra space
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:17PM on page 80
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Looks like this program isn't offered statewide any longer.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:15PM on page 80
Question
Is annual too frequent?
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:14PM on page 80
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Extra space
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:07PM on page 76
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Delete "A"
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 1:03PM on page 75
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Is there are reason for including the street lights on a transportation improvement map?
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:53PM on page 69
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This section addresses mostly non-priority areas, and only the last sentence that touches on some priority features.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:51PM on page 69
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The structure feels a bit off here. I think "Within Mixed-Use Nodes" is a subtext of "Pedestrian Priority Areas" but they look like they are at the same level.
Might be good to number the "three types" to help people follow along.
Might be good to number the "three types" to help people follow along.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:45PM on page 68
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extra space
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:44PM on page 67
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Delete "one that designs and operated streets to" and so it reads "safely accommodates..."
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:40PM on page 64
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Who's hosting and included in this meeting?
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:40PM on page 64
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Change to biannually
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:39PM on page 64
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Hard to read, can we break this text block up a bit?
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:36PM on page 64
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Edit within
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:35PM on page 63
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Rework tone on this bullet point.
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Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:32PM on page 61
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Revise all of these bullet points that have already been completed.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:32PM on page 61
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Deadline is old.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:24PM on page 59
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Double check these numbers
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:21PM on page 58
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Separate into two sentences
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:21PM on page 58
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Add "to"
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:20PM on page 57
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I think it is higher than $700K
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:20PM on page 57
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New sentence, plus delete "the" and add "a".. On average, a...
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:16PM on page 56
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Change accommodating to annexing
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:11PM on page 53
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Extra space
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:08PM on page 51
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What/who is the source of these numbers? Please double check sources and change "officially designated historic structures" to "historic structures." Holladay City Hall is not on the National Register.
Holly Aug 15 2025 at 12:00PM on page 50
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Consider dividing into two sentences for easier reading.
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